Tuesday, June 30, 2015

When The Monster Came To Eat
I lay there asleep
as sound as a baby.
No worries in the world
no nothing, no maybes.
Next thing I knew,
the ground ripped open beneath my feet.
Thats when I knew,
the monster had come to eat.
My brother woke up
with a scream and a cry.
That treacherous night
no one should ever leave behind.
No love lost now
not yet, not how.
But I’ll never forget
the night the monster came to eat.

This poem is about September 4 2010 Canterbury Earthquake which I was in.   

Writen by myself, zara
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 10, 2015 at 9:58 AM

    This is such an amazing poem Zara. I really like the mystery behind it, not saying directly that it was an earthquake. The great use of words you have used and rhyming you have weaved in throughout your poem sounds truly great. This poem is realy good Zara, please write some more :)

    -Jenna

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  2. AnonymousAugust 21, 2015 at 9:29 AM

    That is an awesome poem Zara I love the use of rhyming words and also you didn't tell that it was an earthquake. so it was really cool.........................................................

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  3. AnonymousAugust 27, 2015 at 9:27 AM

    WOW ZARA!
    Thats an amazing poem! You should write more! Its cool how you didn't say it was an earthquake, but it was a monster coming to eat. Great creativity Zara!

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2015 at 9:27 AM

    Hey Zara.
    I really like that poem and how you made the earthquake a monster instead. You should write another poem just like it.
    Bye

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  5. vege ladySeptember 28, 2015 at 4:53 PM

    I love this poem. X x Aunty Rowena

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  6. AnonymousNovember 16, 2015 at 9:14 AM

    Thanks for the lovely comment and I am writing another one at the moment.

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  7. AnonymousNovember 16, 2015 at 9:14 AM

    Thanks for the lovely comment and I am writing another one at the moment.

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